New Year's Renku

Verse 3

3. Three lines. This third verse (the daisan) should reference no season. Unlike the first 3-line verse, don't write it with a strong break. Make it flow smoothly. Also, it's good to have an -ing verb in this verse. This suggests dynamic forward movement. The goal of renku is to always move forward.

Try very hard not to repeat images that came before (go deeper).


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